|
Post by fluffeh on Feb 16, 2009 16:52:03 GMT -6
Name: Poundtail
Age: 14 yrs.?
Gender: Female
Rank: Hunter
Group: EarthGroup
Appearance: Poundtail is a large female dragon. She is quite attractive and is the color black. Her scales are green and same with her horns and tail tip, claws.
Personality: She is very sweet and kind. She is very energetic though and loves to fool around as if she were a hatchling. She really enjoys the company of others and helps them too. She has never been liked by any male before though.
History: Poundtail was born in Earthgroup's nursery area. Her parents loved her so and she had many female friends when she was young. When she grew to a fledgling she had so many friends that many males were envious of her. One male was so envious that he got into a fight with her and left her a deadly surprise. Once she became a hunter though, Poundtail has served her group well.
Extras: She has a scar on the side of her neck. She had been in a fight with a male in her group as a fledgling and she was badly wounded.
|
|
|
Post by Lostsoul on Feb 16, 2009 17:19:31 GMT -6
Could i just ask you to add one more sentence to each? Sorry - the rules have been changed, but not notified on the form BUt hey - your extras almost fill it!
|
|
|
Post by Stealthy on Feb 16, 2009 17:37:01 GMT -6
Depending on how experienced she is you can sort of calculate her age. Just saying because of the '?'.
|
|
|
Post by fluffeh on Feb 16, 2009 17:41:02 GMT -6
Ok, so what should I do, sorry guys if I'm causing you trouble.
|
|
|
Post by Stealthy on Feb 16, 2009 17:43:06 GMT -6
Just modify the first post and add or change stuff.
|
|
|
Post by fluffeh on Feb 16, 2009 17:49:05 GMT -6
So I should add a few more snetences to each the personality, history, etc.?
|
|
|
Post by Stealthy on Feb 16, 2009 18:07:33 GMT -6
Yep, and if you were unsure of the age you can think it over and change it too if you want.
|
|
|
Post by Lostsoul on Mar 8, 2009 4:27:46 GMT -6
Infact i won't ask you to edit this. The age of 15 with the '?' is rather affective. It could either show inexperience of ages (but i don't mind XP) oor it could show a dragon who isn't keeping track of its age.
Then, like i said, the extras fill out the rest, so any reader of this bio could see all the details.
AcCePtEd by ze stubborn one!
|
|