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Post by Lucky Clover on Apr 18, 2009 11:06:38 GMT -6
name: Crystalflake
age: 10
rank: fledgling
gender: female
appearance: Crystalflake is a shimmering white dragon. She has short wings that fold almost completely flat against her sides. She has light blue eyes. Her claws are dull. She has a long tail.
personality: Crystaflake is quiet and shy. She doesn't like to talk to dragons she doesn't know. But she is very nice and friendly. When she is cornered she is very defensive. She dislikes being in large crowds. She is slightly clustrophobic.
history: She was born to two WaterGroup dragons. She had some problems with the other hatchlings because she was very shy. Some more adventures hatchlings didn't want to spend the time trying to get her to talk. Her favorite time is spent swiming. She can't wait to be really good at flying. However it is proving difficult for her with her small wings. She hopes that they will grow longer to help steady her flight. She wants to be a collecter.
rp sample: She sat on the rock, her head perched and laying on the cold rock. It was early morning and she had risen with the sun. Her gleaming eyes blinked slowly around, marvaling at the early dawn light. The glorious rays coming of the horizen were enough to take her mind of the present for a while, and that was well welcomed.
extra: tell me if I did anything wrong, I'm a little confused.
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Post by Lostsoul on Apr 18, 2009 16:19:58 GMT -6
What is the age of your dragon? If your confused 1 real year is 100 dragon years (roughly 3 days is 1 year). Most dragon don't live far past 100 years. I also think that a few sentences could be explained more, but there is no rule for full detail - so i'll let you off. Once you issue an age will gladly except it
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Post by Stealthy on Apr 18, 2009 16:24:29 GMT -6
It says not finished Lost!
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Post by Lostsoul on Apr 18, 2009 16:51:48 GMT -6
*slaps self* DOH! Sorry XP I misread - Forgive me
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Post by Stealthy on Apr 18, 2009 17:11:23 GMT -6
It's okay! Everyone makes mistakes!
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Post by Lostsoul on Apr 19, 2009 14:23:47 GMT -6
I think its finished now.
AcCePtEd by ze stubborn one
If any problem could be named, there are the odd spelling mistake - but they're understandable, so not much of a worry.
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