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Alice
Mar 22, 2009 20:13:53 GMT -6
Post by luvsmutts on Mar 22, 2009 20:13:53 GMT -6
Name: Alice
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Rank: Hatchling
Group: WaterGroup
Appearance: shape- small body head & tail. oval shaped body and head and a row of scales down the back color- body color- a light blue with small light green dots on underside. scales- dark blue/blackish scales. eye color- pale purple eyes. wings- 2 small wings on eaither side of her body. wing color- same as body color.
Personality: alice will be shy at first but when she get to know others she is outgoing, cheerful, and wild. she will be nice to others and try and make friends. when she senses something is wrong with a friend, she will be sympathetic and listen. she will be playful, fun to be around, funny.
History: alice was found as an egg on the beach. she was taken care of by the family that found her. she has never know her real family and looks different from everybody else. when she hatched, she grew slower than others hatched at the same time.
Extras: able to feel and control emotions
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Alice
Mar 23, 2009 0:35:16 GMT -6
Post by Lostsoul on Mar 23, 2009 0:35:16 GMT -6
Controling emotions is not the work of a common dragon unless told so by a member of staff. ~Please change this Also we don't allow human names, i'm afraid I would also like you to use capital letters where appropriate. And the the appeance shouldn't be like a list, try and do it like your personality paragraph. BUT REMEMBER SENTENCE LIMIT RULES!!! -EDIT- I am afraid that no change has happened in the last month, so this bio is considered unaccepted and abandoned. UnAcCePtEd by ze stubborn one. If you want to go back over this bio and correct it, please PM me so that i can unlock it.
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